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Status Updates posted by Sly0712
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The forum may have died, or perhaps its more due to the cliquiness on here that prevented new members from feeling welcome.
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I need a logline critique - A man confronts mistakes of his past when his son goes missiong 3 hours before a nuclear bomb drops on his city... Does it make you curious?
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Well I'd say the main antagonist is time but then I'm sure y'all just rolled your eyes at that. The main antagonist is the father of a criminal who our protagonist lied about in his deposition. So it's sort of like a prisoners scenario. Antagonist lost his son in prison and now wants protag to feel his pain.
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Yeah, time = ticking clock. Antagonist needs to be personified so audience can relate. You know, DIE HARD, McLean was running out of time but still antagonist was key to what made that film great. So your story is revenge, good stuff. Actually DIE HARD 2 was revenge on McLean for killing Hans, but also heist film. Maybe revisit that one.
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Just got a recommend. Many thanks to those who sent me notes upon notes.
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has anyone recived their confirmation of entry for the launchpad pilot comp? Haven't received mine yet. A bit worried.
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so i just got a review gushing about the script on every level. Still a double consider. Don't know what else can be done.
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And now, we wait....
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Just recieved a consider from TB for my pilot. Hoping umpteenth time's the charm.
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And he returned from the dead. Just uploaded a new script I finished. Would like some darling to rip it to bits for me.
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Who knew Russian communism music could help me out of writers block.
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New man of steel trailer. HO.LY.SHIT!
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Just watched the impossible. I only cried 3 times while watching it.
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Awesome Manchester derby. Didn't know Tom cruise was a soccer fan though.
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I tried to get into arrow but I just couldn't. It's a poorly written and poorly acted show. CW does it again I guess.
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Ever write that villain that's so fucked up you know he might just be your projection of your evil side?!