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  1. Pretty sobering and worth a read: http://aspiringtvwriter.blogspot.com

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      agkinowerken

      Apparently this fella offers private script analysis...

       

      http://drainstospace.wordpress.com/

       

      I wonder what that's like...

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  2. What are some good examples of movies/screenplays with two or three separate storylines that don't necessarily intersect?

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      agkinowerken

      The fancy pants film critic word for this type of multilinear narrative is "hyperlink cinema." Wikipedia has a pretty decent list. Though in most cases, whether it be Snatch, Magnolia, or the afore-mentioned Babel, the story lines eventually connect.

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  3. DAVID VS. GOLIATH, storyline kept under wraps. Seriously? Is that an April Fools joke?

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      agkinowerken

      Hero and villain will need arcs. For David, a traumatic childhood encounter with some stones. For Goliath, a crippling fear of heights. The rest writes itself.

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  4. I'm looking for great chemistry romantic meet up scenes between characters not comedy- ala the Adjustment Bureau scene in the bathroom with Damon and Emily Blunt. Any suggestions?

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      agkinowerken

      Roger Thornhill and Eve Kendall in North by Northwest. The scene on the 20th Century Limited.

       

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      agkinowerken

      Really fills in the big picture. Thanks very much!

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  6. If you try to find Saves the Cat structure in Nightcrawler, you're going to have a bad time.

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      agkinowerken

      I like to think of the 'bad guys closing in' aspect of STC not so much in literal terms, but rather as an increasing sense of pressure being applied to the hero. In this case, it's the ever-present 'ticking clock' by which Lou must come up with something new and better each night before 6am.

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  7. Any one using the blacklist to host your script refute a rating? I got a 4 along with 2 7s.

    1. agkinowerken

      agkinowerken

      And not that it matters on the Blacklist but the script in question was a runner-up at Scriptapalooza a few years back. Lesson learned: think twice before requesting a replacement review.

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  8. Any one using the blacklist to host your script refute a rating? I got a 4 along with 2 7s.

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      agkinowerken

      I bought 2 reviews. Both came in at a 7 (with subcategories rated as high as 9) and both had some food for thought in the notes section. One review however had some accuracy issues (e.g. wrong locations). I complained and they offered a free replacement. Big, big mistake. That review came in at 5, thus sending a shiv into my overall rating.

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