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  1. Sly0712

    I need a logline critique - A man confronts mistakes of his past when his son goes missiong 3 hours before a nuclear bomb drops on his city... Does it make you curious?

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    2. jptorma

      jptorma

      A man risks everything when he leaves the witness protection program to find his missing son three hours before a nuclear bomb is to detonate.

    3. adlocke

      adlocke

      trying to perfect on jptorma, a (more about the man i.e. what he also is or who he works for) snitch steers his own course when he leaves the witness protection program to find his missing son three hours before a nuclear bomb is to detonate.

    4. Reader George

      Reader George

      Almost there but who's the antagonist? He can be racing against the clock but it's only interesting if he's challenged by [insert antagonist].

       

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