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Writing Partner and I wrote a Rom-Com, need some feedback. Logline: A once happy couple on the verge of divorce find they can't split until it's decided who gets to keep the dog they both love; and they'll do anything to keep him.
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Just curious, but is there a narrative time-constraint for the story? Or does it just take place over weeks and unfold at its own pace? I ask this, not to sound rude or have a harsh tone (I assure you that's the last thing my tone is), but from the logline I don't get a sense of the narrative urgency/framing device or importance of the dog. Are these two dog breeders, with the 'lead dog' being an incredibly valuable commodity in some contest or something? Is that the framework...
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