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  1. Hasmap

    is it a bad thing that my script is now currently only a 78 pages. at some point today i will be uploading the first 30 pages of my script, Bullets of the dishonored in a bid to gather you guys thoughts before i send the whole thing off for coverage.

    1. sangun

      sangun

      80 pages usually means the script has no middle turn. Just beginning and end.

    2. Hasmap

      Hasmap

      Well it was 91 pages before i sent it off for coverage after doing what's been asked, reducing the length of descriptions, restructuring it and removing lines of dialogue that simply weren't needed. Its been reduced dramatically. About 5 pages of dialogue have been removed from the end scene in The office simply because i was making the characters waffle on.

    3. tonka

      tonka

      Hasmap - after all your cutting, I think Sanguine's comment probably still applies.

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