Nic.Lishko

Definitely their broadest and most accessible film. Thought the last half of the third act was their best work to date. Definitely altered from the initial script I read.

That said, it was a pretty big departure from their mumblecore beginnings. Saw it at AFF last fall. Crowd dug it.

I'm glad they're getting away from the mumblecore. Quiet City (not them, but in that genre) is awful.

Coach (bus) cheapest or Ryan Air (cattle truck of the sky) for cheapo flights

Flying if you don't care about seeing what you're flying over. There's also Virgin Rail which is about 60% less hellish than a coach trip.

Thanks! It's just a quick flyover from Dublin to London, will only be in London for a day, then back to Dublin for a flight back to AZ.

about 3min too long

Enjoyed it, nice job. A simple concept, well executed.

Thank you. It was my first 48 hour film festival and I've definitely learned a lot from the experience. Thanks for the honest feedback, this is thick skin

Whoa, nice!

congrats!

Danke. I'll post it when I can

I am on page 46 and it is just flat so far... going to jump in and read your review

Charlie Brown, how you doin'!? Good to see you still here - I'm back after a long hiatus, though I'm still focusing on some other things right now, and will be for the next several months, but at least I'm back as a browser, a TB voyeur of sorts... :-)

Jason, good to hear from you sir! How goes Goliath?

Hey Charlie! Well it's been pretty much on hold since last summer - I started working at Apple (I'm now an Expert at an Apple retail store) and the majority of my weekly time has been going toward that gig, plus I'm now doing search engine marketing with a great company, working as a freelancer of sorts, so I've been incredibly busy. I had actually moved forward with a small group of people toward making an animated full-length version of the script, but that has since bee...

No leads. Posted request in ISO, I'm sure it'll get here someday .

Trick with this one is I don't think it hit the town wide as a spec. Seems like an in house set up at Energy.

Arent they all? seems like nothing comes out of EE without Brooklyn attached to produce.

Didn't like it either.

I said "pretty" good. Not amazing . I was hoping for much more scary moments, it felt a little too...planned if you will. Also, I think it might be trying to be Lost...

I saw the original cut and I wasn't too impressed. I think it's hard to capture that scared in a movie theatre experience with all the lights shut out feeling... and all the POV / Found Footage camera angles/setups seemed to blah

Instead of paying for coverage have you thought of joining a writing group? I'd love to start one in LA with members of the board if anyone's interested.

writer's groups are tricky. i've been in a few, and the experience can be extremely helpful, but can also quickly devolve into "too many cooks in the kitchen."

I don't actually live in LA ClapYourKnees (yet), but based off of your recommendation, I'll see if there's any local ones in my area!

They're just so long and meaningless sometimes though! lol

Didn't get Low Dweller, thought it was derivative and the characters didn't do anything for me. Seen this story a million times.

Thought it was written pretty dang well...

Why does it look crazy? You mean crazy good, since it has such an amazing cast? This wasn't on my radar, good to see Tony Kaye back (as I'm a big Amer History X fan). http://trailers.apple.com/trailers/independent/detachment/

crazy good, yes.

It's a great idea and would be better than most of the crap titles that sold last year.

Title and Registration and A Lack of Color both sound great to me.

I also like I Will Posses your Heart or Unobstructed Views.

I totally agree and that's why I chose to use him. He's a screenwriter as well and probly won't be doing coverage much longer since he's close to getting a few big projects moving. He posts over on Done Deal as EvilRbt and his site is screenplaymechanic.com. If you want, I could send you a sample of the last coverage he did for me that really helped when I rewrote the script.

You could always post here first. Always start out with the free option.

Thanks everyone! Definitely got a lot to think about

I would think - first draft, a celebratory drink at the end, second draft drinking all the way through because everything now feels so wrong, and third draft a celebratory drink at the beginning for getting there :-)

lol. I approve Red!

LOL.

Not trying to shill, just offering an alternative strategy.

Perhaps you have convinced me....

Which one would you recommend? Any of em or perhaps Story Notes over Marketing?