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  1. Sly0712

    I need a logline critique - A man confronts mistakes of his past when his son goes missiong 3 hours before a nuclear bomb drops on his city... Does it make you curious?

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Well I'd say the main antagonist is time but then I'm sure y'all just rolled your eyes at that. The main antagonist is the father of a criminal who our protagonist lied about in his deposition. So it's sort of like a prisoners scenario. Antagonist lost his son in prison and now wants protag to feel his pain.

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  2. Sly0712

    I need a logline critique - A man confronts mistakes of his past when his son goes missiong 3 hours before a nuclear bomb drops on his city... Does it make you curious?

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Awesome stuff guys. For specificity, he is in witness protection program and returns to the city just to get his son to the safety bunker the government setup for him. But then word spreads of his return leading to a lot of fuckery. Should I state the fact that he is a snitch/in witsec or would that be best left out?

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  3. zkendall

    Any of the top 25 script shadow winners apart of this site?

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      mebishop2001 is the writer of GHOST OF DICKENS.

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  4. Sly0712

    Just got a recommend. Many thanks to those who sent me notes upon notes.

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      Sly0712

      Appreciate it Rob(jaco)

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  5. Sly0712

    Just got a recommend. Many thanks to those who sent me notes upon notes.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Danke Mysterian

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  6. Sly0712

    Just got a recommend. Many thanks to those who sent me notes upon notes.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Thanks.

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  7. Sly0712

    Just got a recommend. Many thanks to those who sent me notes upon notes.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Yessir. 16th draft's the charm i suppose.

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  8. Sly0712

    Just got a recommend. Many thanks to those who sent me notes upon notes.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Oh yeah. I put up multiple drafts here. Worked on it for a year. It's a serialized 1 hour pilot. The new draft which I'm supremely confident with is what did it. I haven't posted that one here.

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  9. sbbn

    Blacklist read recommendations? Usually it's pretty easy for me to find scripts on the list that impress but this time, after quite a few false starts, I've been struggling to find anything I want to read (or, if I did read, glad that I did).

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Didn't care much for unlawful.

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  10. Preminger

    What did you think of the Force Awakens? How would you rank the movie in comparison to the other Star Wars movies?

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      5/10 for me. If people took out nostalgia from the movie and objectively watched it, it would get the same rating as Jurassic world. Paint by numbers anddissappointing.

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  11. JessicaMayo

    I haven't been on TB in a while. What should I read?!

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      read my pilot and give me feedback

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  12. sbbn

    True Detective - thoughts on how they resolved what happened at the end of last week's episode with Farrell's character? Good, bad, meh?

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      meh. Vince Vaughn still not popping yet. Collin Farell is all that's keeping me.

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  13. Sly0712

    has anyone recived their confirmation of entry for the launchpad pilot comp? Haven't received mine yet. A bit worried.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Alrighty. Thanks.

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  14. Reader George

    A few episodes into Sense8 and compelled to watch more, though I can't explain why. Anyone else hooked? Payoff(s) worth the investment?

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Watched it all. It was alright. It's not a family show. Starts slow but once it gets to episode 7 it gets kicked up a notch.

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  15. Sly0712

    so i just got a review gushing about the script on every level. Still a double consider. Don't know what else can be done.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      It was for both writer and concept. I linked it in the works on progress page.

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  16. Sly0712

    so i just got a review gushing about the script on every level. Still a double consider. Don't know what else can be done.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Thanks so much guys. Really appreciate the words of encouragement. Been racking my brain on how to get this from very good to fantastic. Your comments are helping.

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  17. Sly0712

    so i just got a review gushing about the script on every level. Still a double consider. Don't know what else can be done.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Yeah it's a crap shoot at this point. I mean the reviewer says he/she is out fo ideas on improving the script. The rest of the suggestions were just nitpicks but anyway, I'll do it because I'm an idiot like that.

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  18. Sly0712

    so i just got a review gushing about the script on every level. Still a double consider. Don't know what else can be done.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      I guess. But the problem is the reviewer his/herself says its a good bit of writing to show to producers et al. I'm confused as to how I didn't get the recommend.

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  19. Sly0712

    And now, we wait....

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Nothing yet. Usually they release it in the evenings P.S.T

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  20. aphid47

    Snuck in my pilot just before the launch pad deadline.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      me too. 2 minutes before it closed. goodluck mate

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  21. Sly0712

    And he returned from the dead. Just uploaded a new script I finished. Would like some darling to rip it to bits for me.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Oh I meant me. Havent been around these parts for 1 year and some change. Just got back in.

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  22. Pompalompa

    Pacific Rim was one of the worst movies I've ever seen and I'm glad it's over.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      I'd reckon Charlie Hunnam has a harder time enociating words with his Engish accent. He current;y speaks with a mix of London and "surfer dude" American accent.

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  23. Mr Cakes

    Oh, my, The Heat was horrid. Horrid, horrid putrid.

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      The Heat is what happens when lethal weapon and bridesmaids marry and have a premature baby with double digit I.Q

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  24. Escapist

    can you imagine how much Robert Downey is being paid for AVENGERS 2 and 3? and please let #3 be the CIVIL WAR story arc...

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Infinity is a number based on your level of curiosity.

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  25. DeadPool

    I can't believe Tony Soprano is dead...

    1. Sly0712

      Sly0712

      Heart attacks man. Worst ninjas of death.

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