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  1. I need a logline critique - A man confronts mistakes of his past when his son goes missiong 3 hours before a nuclear bomb drops on his city... Does it make you curious?

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    2. adlocke


      the more the better i think. if the audience can understand the movie with short facts it's like cushion to what they have to pay for. it won't hurt the overall experience, which is what people ultimately pay for, willing the expectations can be met for 1.5 hours.

    3. StringerBell


      I agree with adlocke 100%.

    4. andrewpwoodberry


      Why he is in the witness protection program and who is after him are as important as the nuclear bomb. The bomb is the sizzle, the human story is the steak.

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