jjevtic
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Carson should close the loop on himself for adding Looper to his list of worst movies.
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Need to read a script that has lots of people following other people or stalking them. Suggestions?
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Rotten tomatoes is overrated. Can anyone recommend something better?
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Screenplay for drive has 89 pages. The movie is about hour and forty minutes.how do you show slow burning moments/scenes? Also the drive script suffers from he thinks, she thinks.
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Spacing the action lines is one way. More space can be used for action that takes more time to show on screen. You can use white space to adjust the pace of your action.
Off the top of my head, I made an example to illustrate:
INT. Building - Day
Jake slides to a stop and pulls his gun. He levels it at the window. BLAM BLAM BLAM. Glass SHATTERS. He shields his eyes as he's showered by glistening splinters.
Then, footfalls.
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What's the deal with OWAs? Can someone explain?
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From my experience, you do get knocked around a bit at first when pitching for OWAs. Until you are produced or sold and already established, you basically are doing a lot of work for free and probably getting your best ideas copped with no chance of actually getting the job unless you are just phenomenal.
But it's good practice either way.