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  1. jjevtic

    Screenplay for drive has 89 pages. The movie is about hour and forty minutes.how do you show slow burning moments/scenes? Also the drive script suffers from he thinks, she thinks.

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      jjevtic

      Thanks

    2. bladebeam1

      bladebeam1

      Don't see my whole post. Not sure if there's a character limit.

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      bladebeam1

       

      Spacing the action lines is one way. More space can be used for action that takes more time to show on screen. You can use white space to adjust the pace of your action.

       

      Off the top of my head, I made an example to illustrate:

       

       

      INT. Building - Day

       

      Jake slides to a stop and pulls his gun. He levels it at the window. BLAM BLAM BLAM. Glass SHATTERS. He shields his eyes as he's showered by glistening splinters.

       

      Then, footfalls.

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