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What do you think about an inciting incident on pg 16? Is it too late?
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i typed something out but it was all wrong, haha.
opie is saying if you push your inciting incident up earlier, to say pg. 8 or 12, you can shift the extra "set up scenes" you had to cut to make it work, to later on in the first act after the catalyst, and they might even benefit now because you've got the added drama with the inciting incident having already happened.
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