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  1. There's a lot you can learn about serialized tv writing -- and how important "incident" is -- just by reading this timeline of stuff that's happened on This is Us http://www.vulture.com/2018/01/this-is-us-chronological-timeline.html

  2. A lot of people really liked the passengers script (myself included). Nerdwriter has a very interesting take.

  3. If want to write network pilots, you should be reading Ashish's Runway Series every Thursday for the next 4 weeks: http://www.tracking-board.com/the-runway-your-2017-pilot-survival-guide-nbc-dramas/

  4. Testing out the black list. Anyone have a really good experience with the site?

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      I know someone who got her first job as a staff writer after a successful script posting on that site. In addition to being a talented writer, her script was about something unusual which I think made it easy to talk about and helped brand her and leverage her success. The show she got staffed on was a natural fit with the subject of her screenplay.

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  5. So this GASP pitch that Par just bought... it's SEA OF LIFE with the gender reversal in the roles. So why not mention that movie?

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      Yeah, that's a brilliant point! *goes to read old IMDB plot summaries*

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  6. If anyone wants to start a 2017 pilots thread in the appropriate place, I'll start posting scripts.

  7. Hey script reading club, let's chat on Sunday about this coming week's script. If you can't make it, just post here.

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      A bunch of us read or are reading Moonlight so I'll start a convo for that if no one has done it yet!

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  8. Has anyone read this years BlackList winner "Blonde Ambition"? Thoughts?

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      It's the script the script reading club this reading this week, though no one's weighed in yet: http://forum.tracking-board.com/index.php?/topic/16264-script-reading-club-blonde-ambition-by-elyse-hollander/ (I haven't gotten around to it yet - biopics almost always bore me. Give me fiction any day, I get enough real life in real life.)

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  9. Script reading club has a new spec to read. Blonde Ambition!

  10. The annual Top 25 Films video by David Ehrlich always gets me excited again for movies https://vimeo.com/194508152

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      Thanks for sharing this!

  11. Neil Turitz's articles on Tracking Board are genius. I love this guy, and hope he gets more exposure in 2017 for all his excellent work.

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      Agreed! Everything he writes is fresh and insightful.

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  12. Current list of people in the reading group below. Anyone else interested?

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      I would love to join! It's lonely reading scripts by myself with no one to discuss them with!

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  13. I need a logline critique - A man confronts mistakes of his past when his son goes missiong 3 hours before a nuclear bomb drops on his city... Does it make you curious?

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      That's even better that he's racing against two enemies - the ticking clock of the bomb AND the father of the criminal he put behind bars. That makes me more interested for sure!

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  14. I need a logline critique - A man confronts mistakes of his past when his son goes missiong 3 hours before a nuclear bomb drops on his city... Does it make you curious?

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      It makes me somewhat curious. What would push it over the edge to SUPER interesting would be some ironic twist or some fact about the man that makes him sound like he would be uniquely challenged by this situation (more so even than the average person).

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  15. Just finished "When the Street Lights Go On." It's beautifully written and a hell of a page turner, but there's a certain thinness to the story. Reminds me of "The Virgin Suicides" in that way (and obviously in other ways too). Still, I'd pay to see it, I think.

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      This is a TV show now on Hulu! Or will be this year.

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  16. I urge everyone to get stuck into the TB Runway pilot reviews. Andrew and Ashish are on fire. Variety and Deadline should snap them up.

  17. I urge everyone to get stuck into the TB Runway pilot reviews. Andrew and Ashish are on fire. Variety and Deadline should snap them up.

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      I read them all last night and am anxiously awaiting the next round! I laughed out loud several times at the reviews.

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  18. Does anyone have a recommendation for a great evening/weekend screenwriting class (film or TV) in LA or NYC that has you finish a draft of something by the end of it?

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      This is my first time logging in since the new year so I just saw these but they've both already proven to be super useful suggestions - thank you!

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  19. Does anyone know any good text-to-speech tools that work well with scripts? Would love to be able to listen to them while at work...

  20. Saw The Gift last night. A really good movie. Joel Edgerton most definitely has the chops to be a damn good writer-director...

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      I just saw it and liked it also. I thought it had really tight pacing and great dialogue. Jason Bateman was excellent!

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  21. Does anyone know any good text-to-speech tools that work well with scripts? Would love to be able to listen to them while at work...

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      I've had the same thought and have not had great success in finding an answer yet...

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  22. Free logline idea - THE SLIP-UP - A career criminal who fakes workers comp slip-and-fall injuries finds himself at the mercy of his new apartment complex neighbor, a 12-year-old kid who catches him faking and starts blackmailing him to keep quiet.

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      @agkinowerken hahahaha

       

      And I love this idea!

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  23. story endings with protagonists walking away from camera, resuming an argument or banter or repartee? It seems like a convention (like riding off into sunset), yet I'm stuck for examples.

    1. lauriestark

      lauriestark

      Yeah this seems like a common ending for comedies, especially buddy comedies or maybe comedy heists? But I can't think of examples that aren't listed above.

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  24. Just got a letter from AFF that one of my scripts made 2nd round. Felt pretty good after not getting out of the first my last couple of tries.

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