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  1. I know this is old news but I'm on p. 70 of Justin Marks' "Earth Prime" and I'm loving it so hard. I can't believe no one bought this - maybe because the budget would have been 80 quadrillion dollars.

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    2. lauriestark


      Thinking about this more, if there was one thing I'd change, I'd slow it down a notch in Act II. The pace is so frenetic, and the body count so high, that I come out of it only feeling about 3/4 of the emotion I should be. I'd maybe swap one of those big set pieces (maybe the showdown with the skinhead's brother since I don't think that subplot adds very much) and add in another scene like the one with Bijou in the bathroom, or maybe somehow extend that one. It all just ha...

    3. lauriestark


      My comment cut off but all I said was, "It all just happens so fast."

    4. sangun


      I thought it was all sort of mechanical. A lot of the action reads like the writer doesn't care and just wants to get it over with.

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