Hasmap

Hasmap, good point, I hadn't thought of that -- his voice sounded normal, like Bruce Wayne, but they're talking about Batman and Gordon doesn't know he's Batman. So Gordon find out? And if Gordon's on a respirator and Bane has a gas mask on his face, does this mean there will be another neurotoxin released on Gotham City? I'd rather they not repeat that device as The Scarecrow used it in Batman Begins.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lazarus_Pit + The Ultimate Revenge + Creation of Bane + Bruce Wayne falling for Ms. Kyle + Bruce falling for Ra's Daughter + Ms. Kyle betraying Bruce to Ra's Al Ghul = Some pretty awesome shit ... just sayin'

The story is incredible. A friend who's working on it told me the plot -- suffice to say NO ONE will be mad at the end if this trilogy. Nolan topped himself with this... TRUST

Two cents:

Agreed complete with the lettuce monster (Cookies is a sometimes treat) and I never ever was on board. However, I am interested to see if the story will follow his parents, as that particular arc in the comics was AWESOME.

Still, not in. Not yet.

mechanical web shooters win.

 

sorry to nerd out, i love ASM and web shooters a go.

not saying I'm in yet either, but webshooters are a definite PLUS

I have a hunch he's going to kill off Bruce Wayne in this.

Or take a page directly from the comics, and have Bane break Batman's back... I'm feeling like thats where we're going.

I think they should break Wayne's back and then new superheroes are born as a result. The future becomes Dystopic and then 3-5 years from now we'll have a Batman Beyond Trilogy... Bale plays an old Bruce Wayne (and young thanks to Flashbacks) who is in a wheelchair and trains a new protege to become the next Batman

Do you think Mickey Rourke was told not to drink water 24 hours prior to his voice over sessions?

I think if you think Mickey Rourke ever drinks water then I have a bridge to sell you.

It was okay. I guess i'm just not amped about this because it has been so long since the first one...but Josh Brolin in this? i'm curious

Too late to close the barn door once the horse gets out.

Definitely wait. But if you want to gauge your writing, upload your favorite scene and provide some context. For me a scene is like a bite of a sandwich; how many bites do you need to know whether or not you'll like it?

Most of has have done this (some multiple times), and I should tell you that it always ends badly. Once you've solidified yourself as that kind of writer and the script is bad -- trust me when I say it sticks.

"But bailed out by a mystery bailer, but has been clean for..."

Sorry if my post came across as dickish - but come on dude, that's basic grammar. It's an insult to the reader.

No...he/she's dead serious. Over and out.

Can I get Man of tomorrow

 

Yeah, depends on the script for me. The more dense the action paragraphs, the longer it takes. Usually about 2-3 hours for me.

It's directly proportionate to the shittiness of the script. If the script keeps me engaged I can burn through it in less than an hour. If it's an incredibly shitty script, no matter how short, it may takes weeks to never-going-to-be-finished.

But middle turn in what respect, if u don't mindvme asking?

The protagonist going from a reactive state to a proactive state, Hasmap.

Happy to read the whole thing and type out a report, Hasmap. Give me the weekend to do it, though. No cost.

Well, I've never read the books and never will. They're supposed to be even worse than the films because of the perspective their told. Plus, quite vamp-flick fan. Its not i paid to watch them(expect breaking dawn) anyway as when the first two came out i was working at a cinema so i get in free. And I only watched Eclipse when it came out on Blu-ray, which by that time, i'd quit the cinema and was working in a video store. Plus there's jack crap on at the mo there i am. Seen I...

Cyber Hater: Does the shame I have over viewing the films add any amount to the character you have attributed to me? Things happen in this world that are hard to explain. Having seen the Twilight films is one of those things for me...

happy thanks giving all!

Upload it to TB... Lemm read it :-D

Would be interested to see your changes.

With all due respect. Sit on it for two weeks. Stop worrying about length and what's "present and correct." Read it again. Go to the bank. Take out one hundred dollars and go find the nearest homeless person you can find. Sit them down, offer them fifty bucks, they'll ask for more, ergo the hundy. Make them read it right there on the bus bench. Watch their face for significant "tells" regarding your "rising action" and the more subtle aspects of character arc....

Yes, I would greatly appreciate anyone PM my mistakes so I can adjust them.

It's probably a good idea to read through and edit your grammatical errors and mistakes before handing off your script for anyone to read. Even if you're just handing it off to your best friend.

I've gone through all the spelling mistakes. I'm just sorting everything else out at the moment.One of friends is a writer, who has just had his first book published and he's said he'll take a look.

It pisses me off. That was a fucking cool scene, and we're not getting rid of all shooting scenes now are we? Push it back a few months and let it stand. I live in Denver and they're even thinking of closing down the theatre for good. When did we become such pussies?

I think if a movie is released right after a national tragedy, and a scene in that movie closely resembles the tragedy then it will make a lot of people uncomfortable. They're not retro-editing an old movie because of it. They're changing one scene in a movie that's going to be released a month and a half after the tragedy occurred. That scene would take a lot of people out of the movie and instead have them thinking of some psychotic asshole whose only stamp on civilization is no...

I think audiences can discern the difference between 1950's gangster fiction and 2012 reality. A scene set in a movie theatre is meta proof of that difference. Anywsy, right now doesn't matter...movies are "forever" and should be thought of that way.

I don't think 11am is exclusively a British time. We have it here in the States too.

 

I liked it. Not as much as Casino Royale, but liked it. There were a few script problems with shoehorning elements to elongate an action sequence which I didn't like. The whole film owes a lot to Christopher Nolan, there's many similarities to The Dark Knight and Inception. It looked gorgeous though.

I loved, it is without doubt up there withe my fav films of the year. It is to me, the best Craig one yet. Hated Quatum, loved Casino Royale, although I did get bored at points with so much time spent in the Casino. And I love, Goldeneye, and it's better than that. The intro is the best i can recall, Adele's song recalls the beautiful songs from the early years of Bond. Bardem's ref to Jaws is a nice touch and he's the best villian the the series i quite some time(possibly sin...

Too smug for me.

Agreed. This was one of the most fun films I'd seen in a while in theaters.

Why did it do so poorly at the BO?

It doesn't appeal to me in the least. But then I don't really like any of Smith's films.

I used to work at Blockbusters until 3 years ago. Admittedly, I never bothered to watch the Human Centipede. I did see the film on TV once. Bought the second but never bothered to watch it. One film I remember we had one copy of but were ordered very quickly to pull it from the shelf in no time, was the Serbian Film, one person we worked with watched it said don't watch, its just the sickest thing you'd ever see. So no one did. I watch the uncut trailer that was pretty screwed in itself.

I watched it online. It's so ridiculously over-the-top sick that it's easy to roll your eyes and shrug it off.

Departaken? =) What's your logline? Theme? To me a great title works on multiple levels so knowing more about the story would help. Otherwise they are just titles and IMO all (minus Black Sambas) feel bland / generic. You want a title that only fits your story. Congrats on the consider!

What fiction said. I quite like Black Sambas though. It's unique, and inspires an immediate mental image.

Tomorrow They Fall?

The overly-lit cinematography, and some of the creature design (specifically the lead Demon Minion dude, whoever he was) made the whole thing feel like a Power Rangers episode.

Well, of course everyone rightly has there own opinion. But my only quibbles where it was to long and the Aliens were a bland piece of the movie and seemed like they were just thrown in. But my main concern was can the right amount of so many main characters(which wasn't thought possible). And Whedon did, he gave each one enough screen time. And finally the Hulk was done justice after previous efforts: one a complete piece of trash and one so-so film. As long as character are portrayed tr...

The first half was almost walk-out tedious.

Thomas Jane made that for SDCC. It's pretty awesome. Marvel should bring him back!

Marvel does own the rights again, and Jane wants to do it! Could be a good cheap flick to keep the name in the mix.

I wish I didn't know it was The Punisher so that last image would have worked as intended. Grrr...

Please include me in. PM?

@craig, I need to check on something first before can possible sent you the page. And no, I don't have the entire script, just a few scenes where you a sense of the rivalry between a girl named Brook and her mean girl types and Mindy. Who discoveres Dave ID as Kick-Ass. And what I'm guessing is the final battle between the Superheroes and Super-villains, including Hitgirl vs Mother Russia.

It's cool, dude. Thanks.

If it's good then the long running time won't matter but I think too many films nowadays are way longer than they should be...

I would have been surprised if it was any shorter.

How does one stack cars up in a huge pile like it shows in the latest spot?

Maybe getting carried away here but. And of course, my mates mate Kris McManus knows Boorman, who's best mate is Ewan Mcgregor.

i'd wait and get better. you only get one chance to make a first impression., don't wanna ruin that connect with sub par or run of the mill material

What Cyber said.

"Police! Call an Ambulance. Now! Call 911!" xDDDDD!!!

 

Lol

Black Samba: "Please, I'm just a messenger sent to do a job!"

 

Harry looks him dead in the eye.

 

Harry: "MESSAGE THIS!"

I thought she played the part really well and was on good form. Only thing against her was i thought towards the finale some the acting was a little over the top. but thats a small gripe. I liked her in 4.3.2.1. And being in a franchise like Scream will only enhance reputation.

Saw this last night. I didn't like the opening, but the rest of the film ranged from 'meh' to 'very good.' Much better than Scream 3.

yeah, better than part 3 -- worse than 1 & 2... worth my $26 (2 adult tix + online dee bs) + $18 on nachos and sodas

I just gave them a log line with the script. That was it. The coverage (if you get the full package) will come back to you with THEIR logline (the way a reader would logline it for their boss) and the coverage, etc. They will actually do the character breakdown, etc. You just need your script and the logline.

I would just email them. I know when you get coverage the coverage email address is all over the pages. But, I'm sure it's like any studio service. Just send a script and your done.

All you need to provide is the script. Anything else is optional (and unnecessary). The coverage will give you the reader's logline, summary, character breakdown, comments and final scoring grid.

Told u guys that weeks ago!

He looks great!

I want the action figure right now!